Open Call: Shot 54 Overpaint

Artwork Morevna Project
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This is my open call for help with drawing. I have six keyframes of Ivan for shot number 54 (see storyboard - morevnaproject.org/wiki/Image:St … emo-en.pdf). I’m not quite satisfied with them. Can someone help me to fix them?

Here’s rendered draft of the shot: mediafire.com/file/9vwrn1v1neiw0ed

Here’s keyframes I need to redraw:
23hq.com/MorevnaProject/phot … 4/original
23hq.com/MorevnaProject/phot … 5/original
23hq.com/MorevnaProject/phot … 6/original
23hq.com/MorevnaProject/phot … 7/original
23hq.com/MorevnaProject/phot … 9/original
23hq.com/MorevnaProject/phot … 0/original

On the images below I have marked the issues I would like to have fixed:

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[1] - hand
[2] - cloth: t-shirt
[3] - cloth: jacket
[4] - face
[5] - cloth: wrinkles at the elbow
[6] - hand
[7] - fist
[8],[9],[10] - cloth: jacket
[11] - hands
[12] - cloth: jacket

Though, other corrections are welcome. :slight_smile:

Concept images of Ivan for reference:

download.tuxfamily.org/morevna/w … van_21.jpg
download.tuxfamily.org/morevna/w … mo02-6.jpg
download.tuxfamily.org/morevna/w … o06-12.jpg
download.tuxfamily.org/morevna/w … 9-6-01.jpg
download.tuxfamily.org/morevna/w … o27-01.jpg
download.tuxfamily.org/morevna/w … o45-02.jpg
download.tuxfamily.org/morevna/w … 9-3-23.jpg

Thank you!

P.S. Mention in the credits guaranteed.

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Hi!
It is supossed that Ivan is sitting back in Morevna’s Bike, right?
Then the jacket details are not so important because they would be involved in a very quick switch movement beween one pose to other. I would concentrate on the face when he is looking to the camera and to the hands when he is facing back the camera. Think globally!
If I would have both features available (time and drawing ability) I would be so pleased on give a hand :wink:
-G

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Right, that’s a top priority. But having good cloth is would be nice too. :slight_smile:

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Here’s what we’ve got so far on #4 and #7:

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This shot actually ended up as one of my favourites in the demo - there’s real emotion this shot and it came over really well.