finally …im done with the trailer ^^
Very (x3 times) good! Even if I don’t like the idea much (‘Bounty’ was much more interesting to me), it’s still great. Some critique:
Great stuff:
- Backgrounds. You never had any problems with it, feels very atmospheric.
- Dynamic animation is smooth and feels natural.
- Choice of music. Fits good with the animation.
- Lighting and shadowing is better than in ‘Bounty’ if I remember right.
What is not-so-great:
- Work with sound. I hear some noises and trash there in music… Well, music is good, yes, but quality of sound seems pretty bad. Maybe it’s just my sound card or something…
- Humans. I guess they’re supposed to be evil in this animation, but they look just terrible instead (especially the fat guy). I mean, even if they’re bad, you could at least draw them some human-standard parts, like nose, mouth, pupils, etc
Narrative text seems good to me, though I am not good with English too 
P.S. Keep up the good work! I always enjoy watching your animations.
Just want to say … .a big [size=150]Bravo[/size] ! keep it up … for me it’s on the top five synfig’s work i’have saw .
I agree with Svarov on the sound comment … lack of deepness and too much high frequencies, maybe compression problems ?
Nota : if you want frenchglish narrative voice i can give a try 
@Svarov oh great thanks for noticing,…much-appreciated ^^,
bounty is still on the go tho, and this movie is just short ,anyways thank you so much for the critiques
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that sound problem, I agree with the sound deepness issues…any suggestions to fix it?.
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as for the humans, I had to remove those features so that they would appear as if they had no idea what they have done.
cheers! ^^
Absolutely outstanding in animation terms.
-G
sure! you can try!..would love to hear the result…pls do ^^